most of the changes I made are pretty subtle until the third spread. the first spread still needed a better connection. by rotating the mass of alphabet and annotations ninety degrees and enlarging it slighting, along with repositioning it down lower, I think now it showcases a logical relationship between the flat horizontal text with the harsh angle. I was pretty satisfied with the second spread, the only change was moving the title up to the next module to flow with the earlier page. and then the third spread. after a lot of reworking I went with mirroring the angles made by the large annotations from spread 2 as my starting point, and then filled in with the rest of the needed annotations. all the spreads are bold and sharp like Grotesque MT itself. they all seem to flow better as a set than previously.